How
does Curley’s wife present herself?
Curley’s wife presents herself as a
‘tart’ in the eyes of George and the other men.
When
George and Lennie first meet her Lennie looks at her body, ‘Lennie’s eyes moved
down over her body’. The use of the word ‘body’
makes her seem a bit like an object or piece of meat, which she is not, but
unfortunately this is the impression she creates because of the way she
presents herself with ‘rouged lips’ and ‘red’ finger nails. She dresses herself up as a sex
object and so arguably deserve to be thought of as a ‘tart’.
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That's good, certainly but i find that you could try using pearl.
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